The feedback on my project was primarily about the weakness of my concept and it driving the design of the building. Without a strong narrative my project is not believable and has little to no purpose. I’m going to go back a few steps and tie in the concept I had before and rework how it is applied into the sections. If I can get my concept and work it into my vignettes, drawings, and diagrams I feel that I will have a stronger project overall. I would like to work on a more diagrammatic approach to my design and my concept as well to represent my concept.