DD Review: Me-Iterate

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SAMSUNG CSC

SAMSUNG CSC

SAMSUNG CSC

SAMSUNG CSC

Main feedback points:

develop diagrams to clearly and quickly tell narrative, sequential experience of how one uses building, logic of form

develop understanding of connection of structure to arena

define the public circulation; consider whether public mixes with mutants

Moving forward:

At the review I was concerned about some of the project’s form/organization because the logic was not legible and it felt chaotic. Moving forward, finalizing the logic of the arena’s form will help with that, and better articulating the horizontal circulation will help too. I know that my representation of the building in drawings and diagrams is crucial to presenting this project clearly to someone else, especially some type of diagrams that will help tell the story in a simple and visual way.

 

 

 

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